still too many clothes
I agree. This is not even photography. It's just some kid with a phone cam who is bored
This isn't a self portrait, it's a generic low-quality, un-composed mirror phone-cam shot with half your face obscured, and it cheapens your entire gallery to have it in here at all. Why would you bother putting something like this on DA? I never criticize people's deviations, but this is just exasperating. Please, leave this junk for FB and share art with us.
Looking good ^^